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Now I lay me down to rest,
With layers of blood upon my wrist.
I hope I die before I wake,
Because I don't know how much more I can take.
I dont know if this is finished or not I just came up with it recently
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LiyahDeadrose Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
simple but so deep. Love it!
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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Adrea-Aetherwind Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: I love it. This is actually really intuitive and interesting, and in so few words says so much. Plus, I relate way too easily to it. ^^;

Great job. ^^
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2011  Student Writer
thank you :)
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gear-bound-deamon Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Knowing people like this; ones gone and alive; I thank you for making it understandable to others.
A very well-sculpted poem.
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Writer
Thank you :)
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gear-bound-deamon Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
My pleasure.
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2011  Student Writer
:)
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AmaiMirai Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
nice :)
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Tsuki-Tai Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2011  Student Writer
thanks
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